good:
i could get out of the house and join my friends in the stomp. first we wanted to go near alston's house, then jq's father wanted to see him. then we waited.... waited and waited. then jasmine's mother not happy. so, we went to jasmin's house. then jq and alston came. then viknesh wanted to quit.so, alston called mr lim and mr lim blahblah here blah blah there?donno wad he talking about.
medium: starting to become bored. then my dad called. gtg home. then jq evelyn and alston oso get in my father's car.. then he drop them at 352. then i went home.
BAD: ONCE I REACH HOME VERYTHING TURNED BAD SO WAD LOR. I HATE IT. I DON WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT EITHER. HAIZ.

good:
i could get out of the house and join my friends in the stomp. first we wanted to go near alston's house, then jq's father wanted to see him. then we waited.... waited and waited. then jasmine's mother not happy. so, we went to jasmin's house. then jq and alston came. then viknesh wanted to quit.so, alston called mr lim and mr lim blahblah here blah blah there?donno wad he talking about.
medium: starting to become bored. then my dad called. gtg home. then jq evelyn and alston oso get in my father's car.. then he drop them at 352. then i went home.
BAD: ONCE I REACH HOME VERYTHING TURNED BAD SO WAD LOR. I HATE IT. I DON WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT EITHER. HAIZ.